Wednesday, 29 July 2015

Writing Prove It Structure And Language

My goal in writing was structure and language. Here is a part of my writing to show you.

The Ice-Cream Disaster

"It was a normal day in a normal house.Benson and Borris the bears were laying in their normal spaces on the bed.It was a hot day today in fact the Daver family had gone to the beach for the day.They took a chilly bin filled with icey cold drinks and a box of frozen ice-blocks,melting away as the minutes passed by.The ice-block container WAS full, but one of the greedy children took one out.As the child took one out, I fell out.Yes I am a talking ice-cream.


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