Wednesday, 22 July 2015

Writing prove it term 1

My goal in writing for term one was to use connectives.
Here is an example of a peice of my writing

Since I have been in the year seven and eight area, I have been a lot more organised.This is because we get to manage ourselfs.In the morning we put up our faces to let the teacher no that we are here.We also have a bright green box that we could design with all our school stuff in it, we take it everywere we go.We take our boxes to teacher breakouts as well.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Monique,
    Great prove it just one little spelling mistake peice is actually spelt piece.
    Awesome work apart from that. I liked how you added in a sentence from your writing to show us how you have gone.