Writing prove it term 1

My goal in writing for term one was to use connectives.

Here is an example of a peice of my writing

Since I have been in the year seven and eight area, I have been a lot more organised.This is because we get to manage ourselfs.In the morning we put up our faces to let the teacher no that we are here.We also have a bright green box that we could design with all our school stuff in it, we take it everywere we go.We take our boxes to teacher breakouts as well.